STARSDOWN by Jasper Bernes
A review of


by Jasper Bernes

Central question: Can a near-future Los Angeles furnish the operating system for digital poems?
Format: 96 pp., paperback; Price: $13.00; Publisher: Ingirumimusnocteetconsumimurigni, dist. Small Press Distribution; Editor: Joshua Clover; Print run: 500; Book design: the author; Cover design: Evonn Balcziunas; Typeface: Spectrum; Meaning of name of publisher: “We move in a circle and are consumed by fire”; Significance of name of publisher: (1) moths, (2) a late-Latin palindrome sometimes used as a mysterious slogan, (3) the last film made by the situationist theorist Guy Debord; Representative lines: “No one belongs to their bodies as to a paternalistic order any more; / balloons of anaesthetic gas pass hand to hand” (“Rave”)

If the characters in late-model cyberpunk science fiction (say, in Neal Stephenson’s Snow Crash) wrote good poems, poems that suited their high-speed, high-tech lives, those poems would sound like this busy and brilliant first book. Bernes’s writings take on the what-is-real, what-is-mine questions raised by modern life amid digital media; they depict, too, our need for excitement, for something to do. Los Angeles becomes the capital of Bernes’s twenty-second century, a post-hyperafterlife whose parking lots show “A few // Cars left over from the petroleum era but / mostly just slots in the form of our evacuated // Categories.” His high-velocity sentences invoke changeable exteriors, video highways to nowhere, and “mismanaged generations run aground” on a “permanent pink” beach, caught up in hall-of-mirrors epistemes: “Them filming them filming them… It breaks the plane.”

Though he begins and ends with short poems driven by images and ideas, Bernes devotes the middle of his volume to a sequence that tells a story. “Promissory Notes” follows the beveled and sad career arc of Henry Halflife (a.k.a. Henry Hendecasyllable), an outsider artist of the near future (modeled, as Bernes says, on the real painter Ralph Blakelock) who writes his poems on checks. Prose blocks describing the arc of Henry’s career alternate with reproductions of Henry’s poems: one has, for date, “Camera: demiseminever”; for pay to the order of, “Agent Orange Groves et al”; and, in place of a dollar amount, “Virgin Birth Studios, all my fallen Hollywoods.” Henry incarnates past and present L.A.—“The phone book was his concordance, The freeways his veins”—and his work highlights the paradoxes in trying to make an art that defies exchange value. For Bernes, that’s a task very much like not thinking of elephants, and Henry’s poems, like Bernes’s, flaunt the pachyderms that were never there.

Bernes can slip into a theory-soaked postmodern lingo, with nods to the thinkers Guy Debord and Georges Bataille and to the California poet and blogger Joshua Clover (who may run the very mysterious press). Clover might almost have written Bernes’s “Nine Pools,” a poem that includes the halftime score “Depth (0) <> Surface (1).” Yet compared with Clover—and with other with-it contemporaries—Bernes sounds far more earnest and attentive to things seen, heard, and felt firsthand. If the sometime predictability of borrowed ideas is the worst thing about his jumpy, almost ADHD poems, his faith in his own inventive verve is the best. We hear that verve both in Bernes’s paeans and in his frustrations: seeing himself as “incompletion, unincorporated / infinity,” he remains “Stuck the more I struggle to moralize / my way.”

Few poets as hip as Bernes approach Bernes’s variety. Some poems come in prose, others in collage style, all over the page; one presents an expertly managed blank verse. Another, in the form of a list, tours a neighborhood and doesn’t much like what it sees: “Under the parking lot, the beach. / Under the beach, the parking lot.” An analog “Tape hiss of authenticity” (standing for poverty: here the streets don’t get well cleaned) shows how far this banlieue remains from a digital age. Even when I get tired of Bernes’s big ideas, I come back to his book for its quicksilver phrases, and for its glimpses of people—not just Henry—trying to zip through his built-up, half-illusory city in pursuit of all-too-fragile goals.

—Stephen Burt

Stephen Burt teaches at Harvard. His new books of poems are Parallel Play and Shot Clocks: Poems for the WNBA. His book about modern poetry and adolescence, The Forms of Youth, is out now.

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